Tuesday, May 08, 2012

More Avengers

I am reduced to writing dialogue for the movie, which is sad. I can fix this, I tell myself. But I can't. There are too many explosions.

Loki says to Thor, "You don't know what happened to me when you threw me in that wormhole. You don't know what I've been through. I died in there."

Thor, the golden and dim, replies, "You are here and alive, brother."

Loki gives a little laugh and his sneaky Loki smile and says, "I am not the same." And then he adds, with an edge of malice, "Brother."

I'm not happy with Loki's reply. It needs work, and maybe he needs to repeat his blaming of Thor. You did this to me. You robbed me of Asgard and put me through hell. You killed me.


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